I think everything composed made a bunch of sense. But, consider this, what if you added a little content?
I ain't suggesting your content isn't solid, however what if you added a title to possibly grab a person's attention? I mean Mein Cocker Sunny is a little vanilla. You might look at Yahoo's home page and note how they create post headlines to get people interested.
You might add a related video or a picture or two to grab readers excited about what you've got to say. Just my opinion, it might make your blog a little bit more interesting.
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